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Musical Writing
Barry Mauer
This essay explores three approaches to "musical writing"
from a course called "Writing About Popular Music." I
designed the course with the help of Dr. Robert Ray at the University
of Florida and continued to develop it with the help of Li Wei of
the music program at the University of Central Florida.
Though this course offers standard approaches to music history,
theory, and analysis, it also aims to produce new forms of writing
about music that are themselves musical. To this end, the course
explores how musical information is stored, organized, and received,
and it transforms these musical practices into writing practices.
The course is framed around the following research questions:
- If music communicates information, what are the modes by which
it does so? What are the processes by which we assign meaning
to music?
- Are storage technologies (sheet music, phonographic recording)
necessary conditions for musical innovation?
- How do compositional strategies associated with music relate
to writing in other disciplines? What is the relationship between
the history of music and other histories?
To address these questions, we explore theories about composition,
performance, syncretism, propaganda, mass media, appropriation,
and information technology to look at important music genres and
their representative figures, such as jazz (Louis Armstrong, Fats
Waller), big band (Glenn Miller, Duke Ellington), popular vocal
(Frank Sinatra, Ella Fitzgerald), and rock (Elvis Presley, Little
Richard). These musical genres/styles/individuals not only coincided
with transitional moments in music technology (recording studios,
radio, long-playing phonographs, television, digital and sampler),
but also represent stylistic and conceptual contrasts manifested
in the dichotomies of "composition/improvisation," "vocal/instrumental,"
"rhythm/melody," "original/copy," "black/white,"
"understate/virtuosity," and "art/entertainment."
Listed below are the major projects assigned to the class. The
remainder of my essay provides writing samples using three of these
methods.
Assignments:
Project 1: Using Michael Jarrett's "ABC" method
as a model, write a paper (3-5 pages) entitled "The ABCs of
'Black and Blue'" in which you explore five dimensions of Louis
Armstrong's "(What Did I Do to Be So) Black and Blue."
One of your "takes" should be a comparison/contrast among
the performance styles of Louis Armstrong, Fats Waller, and Ethel
Waters.
Project 2:
Option 1: Write a paper (4-6 pages) in response to the following
hypothetical; in mid-1944, you receive a letter from General Eisenhower
to your office in the U.S. Department of War Propaganda, requesting
justification for continuing musical propaganda efforts. He asks
the following three questions: Why continue to use entertainment
as propaganda? Why use big band swing? Why use Glenn Miller (rather
than Duke Ellington)? Discuss Miller's "In the Mood" to
make your case, using Charles Eckert's structuralist Marxist method
to explain how the song functions ideologically.
Option 2: Consider music as a means of persuasion and pick
one or two examples from our discussions (e.g., Glenn Miller's military
bands, Nazi propaganda music). Write a paper (4-6 pages) that addresses
the following questions: 1) How does music affect our thoughts and
perceptions, especially during wartime and political campaigns?
2) Through which means does music convey its embedded political
messages? Can a musical work succeed both politically and artistically?
Project 3:
Option 1: Great stylists often model themselves on the work
of someone in another field; Johnny Rotten of the Sex Pistols modeled
his performance style not on a musical example, but on Laurence
Olivier's performance of Richard III. Frank Sinatra modeled
his ballad singing in part on the trombone playing of Tommy Dorsey.
Your assignment is to openly model your writing style on Sinatra's
ballad style in order to examine the musical and dramatic lessons
of the album In the Wee Small Hours of the Morning. Using
the terms of information theory, explain the features of the style
you develop.
Option 2: Write a paper (3-5 pages) in which you explore
Frank Sinatra's album In the Wee Small Hours as a dramatic
performance, using Bill Bruehl's theory of method acting as a guide.
Your goal is to describe the persona Sinatra creates, the dramatic
super-objective of the album and the sub-objectives in particular
songs down to the level of individual lines and words.
Project 4:
Option 1: Using the theories of appropriation presented in
this section, write a paper (4-6 pages) exploring the method of
appropriation used by Elvis Presley and Sam Phillips in their collaboration
at Sun Records, or in world music.
Option 2: Produce a multimedia project (audio or audio/visual)
employing appropriation techniques learned in class. The project
can include original compositions, but should show the kinds of
"borrowing" discussed in our case studies. You may also
choose to do a multimedia "documentary" about appropriation
in music.
The ABCs of "Black and Blue"
Introduction
I'd like to hear five recordings of Louis Armstrong
playing and singing 'What Did I Do to Be So Black and Blue' -- all
at the same time.
-- Rhinehart, from Ralph Ellison's Invisible Man
Michael Jarrett's Sound Tracks: A Musical ABC, Volumes 1 - 3
Sound Matters takes a novel approach to writing about music;
Jarrett uses the alphabet as a kind of jukebox, with each letter
cuing a short discourse on a musical topic. My "Black and Blue"
project, demonstrated below, seeks to satisfy Rhinehart's wish in
Invisible Man. Instead of hearing the song played from five
recordings, however, I write five "takes" on the song,
each cued by a different letter of the alphabet. Below are two"takes"
I produced, cued by the letters D and E.
D -- The Double
A bully with a gun doesn't always get the art he orders.
New York gangster Dutch Schultz invested in a show at Connie's
Inn, a Harlem nightclub catering to wealthy whites and serving booze
during prohibition. Gangsters profited enormously from such clubs
during prohibition, and nothing brought in the profits like famous
entertainers on the bill. The show at Connie's Inn was called "Hot
Chocolates" and it featured the biggest names in jazz - Louis
Armstrong, Fats Waller, and Edith Wilson. The show contained the
soon-to-be-famous Waller-Razaf composition "Ain't Misbehavin'",
but Schultz wasn't satisfied. He wanted a song that allowed the
audience to laugh at the expense of black people. Perhaps he imagined
that such a reaction from the audience would generate more profits;
perhaps he was just mean-spirited. He ordered Razaf to write "a
song about a 'colored girl' singing about how hard it is to be black."
[Citation?]
Andy Razaf, like his grandfather John Waller, made the most of
his opportunities for advancement. John Waller had worked his way
from slavery to become U.S. consul to Madagascar. Andy Razaf had
worked his way from elevator operator in the Brill Building to become
a significant lyricist in Tin Pan Alley at a time when few blacks
worked on Broadway or in publishing. He wasn't about to demean himself,
but he couldn't ignore the gun Dutch Schultz shoved in his face.
Razaf wrote:
Brown and yellows / All have fellows
Gentlemen prefer them light
Old empty bed / Springs hard as lead
Feel like old Ned / Wish I was dead
All my life through I've been so black and blue
Even the mouse / Ran from my house
They laugh at you / and scorn you too
What did I do to be so black and blue?
I'm white inside / But that don't help my case
'Cuz I can't hide / What is in my face
How will it end / Ain't got a friend
My only sin / Is in my skin
What did I do to be so black and blue?
These lyrics offer a double message - one for patronizing white
audiences, another for blacks and sympathetic whites. The first
stanza furnishes the narrative context for the song, a woman's lament
over lost love. Louis Armstrong deletes it, thus changing the meaning
of the song so that it only makes sense as a commentary on the plight
of blacks in general. The line, "What did I do to be so black
and blue?" refers to being very black (color) and very blue
(mood). But it also means, What did I do to get the shit beaten
out of me?
The next verse, "Old empty bed/ Springs hard as lead/ Feel
like old Ned/ Wish I was dead" means My lover is gone from
my bed, but it also means, I'm so poor, my bed has no sheets
and blankets.
The rest of the song offers similar double messages. When Armstrong
performs pop songs, he "doubles" the messages in his performance
just as Razaf does in his lyrics. Louis had a gun pulled on him
too (in Chicago) and he knew what to say to keep his skin, but he
never stopped communicating to his core audience.
E -- The Editor
Louis Armstrong elevates the performer to unparalleled dignity
in his 1929 recording of "(What Did I Do To Be So) Black and
Blue." He edits the song; by dropping the first verse and introducing
the lyrics with funereal strains on his trumpet, Armstrong makes
a new composition. He removes the original narrative -- the story
of a black woman losing her man to a lighter-skinned woman -- but
retains the first-person voice and generalizes the story, speaking
for anyone who can identify with the protagonist's position. In
Armstrong's hands, the lament no longer dwells on lost love, but
on the suffering of a whole race exposed to conditions of poverty,
misery, violence, and despair.
Armstrong, perhaps the greatest inventor in jazz, was also its
greatest storyteller, knowing what to put in to a song and what
to leave out. In jazz, the player makes something new of the song;
he makes the song express what he wants it to express. Another word
for this practice is editing. In oral cultures, poets "riff"
on existing stories, do their editing on the spot, in front of an
audience, just as Armstrong did in front of crowded theaters, recording
equipment and television cameras. In literate cultures, composers
do their editing laboriously, over time, and out of sight. Armstrong
never labored over editorial decisions; he edited joyously, spontaneously,
in full view. By elevating the performer (one who edits on the spot)
above the composer (one who edits out of sight), jazz inverts the
hierarchy of European music; the performer no longer pretends to
represent the absent composer's "intentions." He signals
his own.
Leonard Bernstein once suggested that the reason philistines think
jazz a "low class" music (he was writing in 1955) is that
"historically players of music seem to lack the dignity of
composers of music." He argued, however, that "the player
of jazz is himself the real composer, which gives him a creative,
and therefore more dignified status." (Giddins, 165)
Armstrong brought the tradition of oral poets into the electronic
age. Like them, he took pleasure manipulating known material to
his own ends. But unlike a poet or musician in an oral culture,
Armstrong had a range of literate traditions from which to draw.
Starting with the recordings of 1928 in New York City, Armstrong
added the songs of many composers, including the Gershwins, Porter,
Berlin, Kern, and Carmichael -- highly literate craftsmen -- to
his repertoire. Armstrong honored the composers' melodies but invented
on them constantly (with his unique rhythms, vocal inflections,
and performance styles). His practice of "editing on the spot"
became as important to the future of jazz as the repertoire he introduced,
elevating the performance and, with it, the dignity of the performer.
Musical Structure/Ideological Force: Glenn Miller's "In
The Mood"
The sample essay below arose from the insight that structuralist
methodologies could bridge the gaps among various forms of communication,
including music, writing, and film.
The Glenn Miller Story, the 1954 biopic starring James
Stewart as Glenn Miller and Louis Armstrong as himself, reveals
stark contrasts between these men and their music. These contrasts
can be mapped as a series of structuring binaries. Below I map the
binaries associated with Miller and refer to the structuring elements
as being either "used" or "unused." My model
for this work is Charles Eckert's structuralist (Marxist and Freudian)
reading of the film Marked Woman, which represented a major
breakthrough in cultural studies, showing how the deep structure
of a text could reveal its ideological operations. The writing sample
about Glenn Miller's "In the Mood," below, demonstrates
how Eckert's method can be used to study music.
A structuralist reading of "In the Mood" reveals its
valorization of corporate technocratic values over modernist high
art values. The first table below consists of materially verifiable
data, with the used elements on the left and the unused
elements on the right. In other words, the table lays out the options
that were available to Miller, showing the choices he made for each
option. The second table consists of inferences derived from the
first table.
Table One: Verifiable Data
| 4/4 rhythm |
2/4 rhythm |
| riff-based composition |
melody-based composition |
| repetitive arrangement |
varied arrangement |
| simple 1-4-5 chord pattern |
complex chord pattern |
| major key |
minor key |
| fast tempo |
slow tempo |
| ensemble featured |
soloist featured |
| big band |
small band |
| with leader |
with no leader |
| instrumental |
vocal |
| white band |
black or integrated band |
| male band |
female or mixed band |
| short song (but could go on) |
long song |
| winds and brass separate roles |
winds and brass together |
| scored |
unscored |
| "clean" playing |
"rough" playing |
Table Two: Inferences derived from Table One
| secular |
religious |
| for dance |
for listening |
| for radio, jukebox, and record |
for concert hall |
| for play and work |
for sex |
| professional |
amateur |
| machinic (train, telegraph, factory) |
lyrical |
| not virtuosic |
virtuosic |
| efficient |
excessive, decorative |
"In the Mood," but for what?
As in the modern factory, the Miller Orchestra's labor is divided,
with winds and brass taking separate riffs. The entire organization
of skilled laborers (professional musicians) is led by a "manager"
(Glenn Miller) and played according to a "blueprint" (score).
The efficient performance and riff-based structure of the piece
gives it an "industrial" sound (like machines moving in
perfect counter-rhythm: the sounds of train and telegraph). The
arrangement features an ensemble of machines and human workers performing
well and at full capacity. Not surprisingly, the song was hugely
successful on record, radio, and jukebox: modern machines in social
spaces.
Although "In the Mood" features "black" musical
traits (the 1-4-5 chord progression, swing rhythm, and riffs), and
there is minor use of growling and glissando playing in the solos,
Miller adapts the black forms by playing straight major chords (avoiding
blue notes like flat fives and sevens), sweetening the sound with
wind instruments played in unison and keeping the rhythm section
and winds to mezzo-piano dynamics with mild crescendos while the
brass "punctuates" with forté dynamics. The song
appealed to the vogue among white youths for energy and vitality
in music: it is uptempo, perfect for jitterbug dancing, designed
for fun not contemplation, syncopated, and repetitive. There is
no vocal part (although the song had lyrics written by Razaf), no
displays of sheer virtuosity, and no artiness despite a surprisingly
complex coda.
"In the Mood" feels overwhelmingly optimistic. The introduction
swings, beginning with the winds in unison playing an ascending
major arpeggio, then continuing with a telegraphic repetition of
the high note five times before finishing the phrase. The brass
then takes over from the winds, playing a repeated riff with a strong
emphasis on the one and four beats, which the rest of the band punctuates.
Then the piece settles into its "in the mood" groove,
with the brass punctuating the four and one beats of every second
bar until the twelfth bar; next the brass repeats the same note,
in syncopated rhythm, eight times, ending on the four-one beats.
When the piece hits full stride, the brass punctuates the four and
one beats of every bar.
The arrangement clearly makes the ensemble the star. While "In
the Mood" features soloists, none have the dazzling power of
Louis Armstrong, whose playing heroically dramatized the individual
in relation to the ensemble. By contrast, the Glenn Miller Band
is a perfectly functioning machine, with each solo player exercising
a controlled exuberance within the context of a corporate arrangement.
"In the Mood" suppresses anxieties about emerging social
forces such as the increasing submission of the individual both
to the group and to authority and the introduction of machines into
every aspect of daily life. The song promises fun relations among
individual, group, authority, and machine in which submission to
the new social order does not pose a threat.
Frank Sinatra's Programmed Uncertainty: The Fermata and Other
Deviations
(Try this -- begin with a list of key words and arrange a pattern
from them. Then develop an essay from this pattern. Your reader
will enjoy imagining a multitude of possible themes and arguments
arising from your key words. Sinatra's frequent collaborator, Nelson
Riddle, often begins his arrangements, particularly of well-known
songs, with a musical method similarly designed to increase desirable
uncertainty. He introduces tones the listener will find in the piece,
but he doesn't spell out the melody; hence, the systematic uncertainty
of all beginnings meets designed uncertainty half way)
Key Words: information / interruption / style / expectation
/ pattern / silence / deviation
The greater the uncertainty or entropy in a system,
the less the probability that any one outcome will be implicated
and the greater the information.
-- Leonard Meyer
1) What made Frank Sinatra the greatest musical stylist of the
century?
Examining the style of his 1953 ballad record, In the Wee Small
Hours of the Morning, we find a careful balance between redundancy,
which reduces information, and entropy, which increases information.
Redundancy provides a familiar context for audiences to test their
expectations; at least eight of the sixteen songs on the album (three
by Rogers and Hart, two by Arlen, an Ellington, a Porter, and a
Carmichael) had become bona-fide classics before Sinatra made this
record. And all the songs address the most familiar of popular music
themes: affairs of the heart.
Sinatra cites these patterns in order to deviate from the courses
we expect. In other words, Sinatra's style yields entropy, hence
information. Sinatra virtually invented the Great American Songbook,
and he did so by taking great songs from their original contexts
in stage shows, Tin Pan Alley catalogues, and movies. Here, he "quotes"
the songs for his own purposes, placing them in a new context, the
concept album, and giving them new dramatic and emotional weight.
By creating a dramatic persona for Wee Small Hours, a man
haunted by lost love who sings these songs as if to himself, Sinatra
turns our expectations about music inside out, just as his dramatic
character turns his own thoughts inside out.
When Sinatra repeats a line within a song, it means something different
the second time, and the second delivery changes the meaning of
the first one. For instance, in Arlen's lovely song "I'll Be
Around," he sings, "Goodbye again / and if you find a
love like mine / just now and then / drop a line to say that you're
feeling fine." When he "repeats" the verse, he cuts
the lyrics after "Goodbye again" and remains silent for
an unbearably long period, picking up the lyric with "now and
then," but well after the beat where he uttered those words
previously. When Sinatra repeats the line, the stress changes (from
"then" in the first delivery to "now" in the
second), the moment of his return after the silence is lengthened,
and he infuses the lyrics with greater dramatic significance; we
learn that the character has been, all along, only rehearsing the
lines to himself yet he still can't bear the separation called for
in the "goodbye again" or the self-imposed isolation called
for by the silence, which he ends with a pleading "now."
So, how many ways to render an action?
So, how many ways to render an action?
So, how many ways to render an action?
(Try this - repetition and variation, or, ask the same question
but get a different answer.)
2) What made Sinatra the greatest musical stylist of the century?
The sustained tones, hesitations, and varied emphasis of the continually
vulnerable yet painfully aware romantic made Sinatra the most prominent
auteur of popular song.
Sinatra . . . emphasized key words or notes through
a combination of choices related to dynamics (loud or soft) and
rhythm (short versus long notes) . . . early in his career Sinatra
apparently decided that he liked to stress the first note of the
final A section, coming immediately out of the bridge, and he stresses
this note in at least one out of every four songs he does. It doesn't
matter that this word often turns out to be as unimportant as something
like "and" in "Where or When" or "I Only
Have Eyes For You," or "soon" in "If I Loved
You." . . . Jim Mayer recalled a conversation with Harold Arlen
in which he asked the composer, "'What songwriter would ever
use a fermata on the first note of an eighth-note triplet?' Harold
thought about it and said, 'No one. It wouldn't work.' I said, 'Well,
you did, in "Last Night When We Were Young." And you know,
Frank Sinatra is the only singer who ever picked up on that.'"
-- Will Friedwald (146-7)
The fermata, a musical notation, indicates a moment of hesitation.
Composers, recognizing the unwritable, denote an unpredictable interstice;
hence a fermata is planned, yet fluid, uncertainty. When Sinatra
holds or pauses longer than expected, as he does during the verse
in "I'll Be Around," he reinvigorates the tradition of
classic songs. Sinatra had a vast and wholly deliberate range of
dynamics, from operatic force to aching whisper, more so, arguably,
than most singers and therefore he held open more choices and thus
more information. But he also knew how to increase the available
choices by playing with other variables, by altering the stresses
or holding a note longer than expected (the fermata) or by inserting
silence. Sinatra uses the fermata to aggravate questions, begging
the implied resolution, avoiding a verse or chorus sung the same
way twice. And in the ballads, the haunted heart anthems (the slower,
more contemplative songs that allow time in which to consider and
maneuver) time provides proliferations of choice, considerations
of a greater number of options, of futures.
Information theory tells us that the longer a musician holds a
note, the more we expect a significant shift:
Musical meaning . . . arises when our expectant habit
responses are delayed or blocked -- when the normal course of stylistic-mental
elements is disturbed by some form of deviation . . . Three varieties
of deviation may be distinguished. (1) The normal, or probable,
consequent event may be delayed. Such a delay may be purely temporal
or it may involve reaching the consequent through a less direct
tonal route, provided that the deviation is understandable as a
means to the end in view. (2) The antecedent situation may be ambiguous.
That is, several equally probable consequents may be envisaged.
When this takes place, our automatic habit responses are inadequate,
for they are attuned only to a clear decision about probabilities.
And (3) there may be neither delay nor ambiguity, but the consequent
event may be unexpected -- improbable in the particular context.
-- Leonard Meyer
The fermata corresponds to Meyer's first variety of deviation since
it delays the arrival of the consequent, the continued progression
of a lyrical and melodic phrase. Fermatas become nodes from which
new futures arise. The node, swelled with possible meaning, at once
blocks the unfolding landscape of events and offers other unfoldings,
other directions. A nodal space, at once framed, transcends its
own function in narrative or exposition; it produces a deliberate
vagueness, followed by the focus of technique, implying that style
is thought.
3) What, in writing, produces the fermata-effect?
One possible answer: the interruption. The typical academic essayist
labors to limit the meaning of words to an immediate context (the
"style of rigor" -- "don't drift, don't remind your
reader of other contexts"), but we won't. We'll interrupt the
expected unfolding and deviate. We'll create our own styles, but
how? Puns drift, are vague, are replete, since they burst and overflow,
regenerating a myriad of other contexts. Get my drift? Quotation
marks select nodal "places," offering yet another possible
means of achieving the "fermata-effect" since they imply
interruption by other voices -
Everything will be hesitation, disposition of parts,
their alternations and relationships -- all this contributing to
the rhythmic totality, which will be the very silence of the poem,
in its blank spaces, as that silence is translated by each structural
element in its own way.
-- Stephane Mallarmé.
Quotation marks interrupt by suggesting purposeful distance from
common meaning, a distance both ironic and ideological, since they
displace the composer's authority. Can you think of more ways to
establish a pattern and then deviate from it while still keeping
the pattern in view? Can you think of other ways to increase the
density of information in academic writing? Do questions themselves
produce desirable uncertainty? Since we expect certain questions
in particular contexts, these questions produce less information
than questions that are unexpected (and how does one expect deviations?)
Imagine a book, as yet unwritten, about the role of the question
in generating information. What questions would it ask? How would
it interrupt itself?
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Barry Mauer earned his doctorate in Cultural
Studies in May 1999 from the University of Florida in Gainesville
and now teaches in the English Department, the Film program, and
the Texts and Technology PhD program as an Assistant Professor at
the University of Central Florida in Orlando.
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